Tuesday, October 02, 2007

Poetry Week

I think this must be poetry week. Copper is on a poetry spurt and Ivy just got her published book in the dogmail. So, I think I should write a poem too. Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, does it? This poem actually took place last week.... you will understand after you read it.


Las Vegas by Hana the Dog




Oh Father Oh Mother,
to Vegas you flew,
Leaving me at home,
to cry over you.


I would walk to meet you,
across the desert clay,
But little Hana legs can’t carry me,
so far away.

Guard sphinx, watchful lions,
and giant water bowls to behold,
But what about me,
your furbaby left at home unconsoled?


From the mall at Caesars,
to the Luxor and more,
Why am I banished at home
while you visit just about every store?


I humor my grandparents
and am rewarded with food,
Oh yummy canned tuna!

a pretty nice life you'd conclude.

With pats on my head,
and a tasty new treat,
I decide to wait here,
luxuriating quietly at their feet.


At night it is slow,
while I await your return,
Is it time, is it time?
So hard to discern.

Friday comes,
and I hear a faint noise,
Is it them, is it them?
I hope it’s not the neighbor boys.

In comes my Mom,
with a big smile on her face,
She showers me with kisses,
while I anticipate her embrace.

Then in comes my Dad,
tired from the full week,
But he gives me a giant hug,
and my world is now at peace.


Love,
Hana the Dog



16 Comments:

Blogger L said...

Hana, Hana,
you're sly like a fox
knowing a secret
about our girl's black box.

Yet all of this time
you had a secret of your own.
Gobbling up tuna
while your people are gone.

Your secret is out
and it happens to you
when the black box comes out
your people bid adieu!

Let's band together
Let's not take it anymore.
When the black boxes come out
Don't let the people through the door!

October 02, 2007 9:14 PM  
Blogger Hana said...

Comet and BLU,
My Mom is laughing so hard at your poem, she has tears in her eyes! Your poem is twice as good as mine, yet it took you just a couple minutes to write your poem. By the way, I did try to fit your black box into my poem, but I was unable to work it in. I will try harder next time.
~Hana

October 02, 2007 9:35 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The dreaded black box
gets filled up with socks
then your people fly, fly away

When they get home
they don't have a bone
it's sure not your lucky day

October 02, 2007 11:19 PM  
Blogger Duke said...

You're an awesome poet Hana!

Love ya lots,
Maggie

October 03, 2007 2:43 AM  
Blogger L said...

Hana, we're glad your mom liked our little poem. hehehehe
Zach is sure right about them coming back without even a bone! Now we have to figure out how to destroy that black box.

We think you might be right about another trip. The girl took all her stuff out of the box last night, but didn't put the box back in the closet like she usually does. That means she is leaving again soon. How did you know?

October 03, 2007 7:45 AM  
Blogger Ivy said...

great poem hana! giant hugs are the bestest!

October 03, 2007 1:08 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

oh Hana you are just beautiful!

Sister says for christmas, she wants a basket of Eskie puppies.

her husband says no...

so she said she's gonna ask santa.

:)

October 03, 2007 1:36 PM  
Blogger JustMeCopper said...

My Mom and Dad's boxes are brown. Great poem. Way better than mine.

October 03, 2007 5:05 PM  
Blogger Lorenza said...

Hi, Hana
Sorry the poetry is not my thing, but I loved yours and those from our friends too!
I am so proud to have talented friends!
Have a good night
Lorenza

October 03, 2007 6:08 PM  
Blogger Girl Girl Hamster said...

Woh Hana, you can write poem. That's a pawsome poem

~ Girl girl

October 04, 2007 12:22 AM  
Blogger Luckie Girl said...

What a great great poem Hana! :) *clap clap*

October 04, 2007 12:39 AM  
Blogger Girasol said...

I like your poem

October 05, 2007 4:58 AM  
Blogger Hana said...

Oh Zach! That is a good poem you wrote!! I told my people about it and they will try to bring me something back next time.

October 06, 2007 2:54 PM  
Blogger Opy - the Original GruffPuppy said...

That's a great poem Hana - and about my mum and SHD's favourite place :-)

You are very clever :-)

Love
Opy

October 07, 2007 3:56 AM  
Blogger Linda Fleming said...

What? Your parents left you and then came back with no gifts for you? Oh my! That is not acceptable. They owe you a shopping trip at Petsmart!
Big Wags,
Isabella

October 07, 2007 9:27 PM  
Blogger Miss Reina said...

Wow, you are good with words!!! I like the canned tuna part! Sounds yummy!

hehehe

Love,
Reina

October 09, 2007 8:34 AM  

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